Archive | June, 2011

Music to Write Girls By

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photo © luca


Much typing here at writingislovely towers as I try to get this nth draft finished, in order to begin on the next and meet my deadline. Each draft adds more words, more detail, another layer of paint. Plenty gets cut, too, but please let’s not dwell on wordcount today.

This week I’ve been working on my heroines. Making them strong on the page, making them 3D – even though two of them are, at least in this telling, villainesses. Well, they need detail too, don’t they? Why would all the other characters cower and scatter at their approach, unless they have real substance? These ladies think they’re in the right, they think a Happy Ending is the one where they win and everything and everyone that was once in their way lies blackened and ruined. So, I’ve been spending time with them, imagining them centre stage, figuring out new nastiness for the violent one, new vanities for the cruel one.

And my ‘good’ heroine? Gah, she kept crying through one of the first, skeletal drafts. She didn’t like the forest, or being far from home, and she was worried she would lose and everyone would laugh at her. Okay, I see her point – but the heroines I like to read about, and the ones I want to write, have more courage than that. Of course they don’t like the scary forests, who would – the clue’s in the name, scary – but they figure out winning ways to get through it, tossing about quips and feats of cunning while they are at it. Hmmph. It is not as easy (of course) to write a character who is heroic, yet real, as it is to read one. Someone relatable yet still fantastic enough to warrant a tale. I’m getting there, but it will take a few more drafts ’til I am satisfied.

So. Here are some songs to write heroines by – whichever side they are on, good or evil. I didn’t want anti-man songs, or love songs if I could avoid it – the songs should be about how ace they are, not how rubbish boys are. These are songs that give me a swagger, so I hope that’ll be the case for your characters, as well.

As usual, if you don’t see a player please follow this link to 8tracks.com

(8tracks can only play songs in the same order twice, something to do with copyright & licensing. Here’s the tracklisting for the first couple of listens:

Wang Dang Doodle – PJ Harvey
Not Too Soon – Throwing Muses
The Littlest Birds – The Be Good Tanyas
Gone Again – Patti Smith
Walking Back to Happiness – Helen Shapiro
Rock ‘N Roll – Elastica
Monster Hospital – Metric
Feed The Tree – Belly)

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How other people write

photo © Michael Jastremski

photo © Michael Jastremski

There will be a page on this site linking to books and people whose writing advice made big changes to how I work. Despite the fact that one of the only things I’ve learned so far is that whatever works for me, that’s how to write. There’s nothing more to it. I’m not going to find a list somewhere, written by someone else, that tells me how to do it.

What works for me is that I’m allowed to do whatever it takes to get the work done – for me, word counts don’t work, deadlines don’t either, and imagining being judged will freeze me totally. Jealousy, fear and competitiveness don’t drive me either. Constant reminders that I love what I do – that works.

Treating writing as fun makes me seek out time to spend with my manuscript. Being allowed to do whatever draws me that day – whether it’s writing a scene further along, skipping around the story, or editing instead of composing, or outlining instead of editing – I love all parts of the process, when I get to choose, and so I don’t give myself rules that I must only do, say, X job for 10 weeks and then swap. Because every time I do that I rebel, and I stop turning up. The pens gather dust. Writing feels like ‘work’, and my subconscious hates that word. Sorry to be corny and self referential, but writing is lovely – remembering the joys of that is what gets me back in that chair day after day. And, yes, what named this site :-)

But. But. Before I knew that, when I’d just started trying to write seriously, I found all these blogs by writers and thought if I read them enough I could glean that secret way, that magic list telling me how to keep going until my novel was finished. And good. I freaked myself out a lot, compared myself to others too much and wondered if I was wrong not to be as organised, or as depressed, as energetic or as anti-social, as other people were. As Real Writers were.

not for robots laini taylor Jim Di Bartolo

And then my friend lent me ‘BlackBringer’ by Laini Taylor (which is deliciously good – I adore it!) and I found out that she had a blog, Not for Robots, about what works for her and – ta-da! – loads of it worked for me, too! That silly document I had where I made notes and lists and talked to myself about the other, ‘real’ document where the pretty words were – instead of berating myself for messing around and not doing Real Writing, I now call it my Working Doc, like Laini. Rather than resent that fact that a lot of what I find and decide about the story will be chucked out, changed or never included – I now see it as a useful, exploratory swathe through the trees of what might be a novel, my machetes cutting a plot through the big, unmapped jungle of my story. And when I figure out a problem, or find a detail that I know in my gut is just right, I agree that ‘snick‘ is exactly the right word.

Have a look at her site. Click any of the links or that great cartoon up there (her husband drew it!). Maybe all you’ll find is a reminder that however you work, that’s right. You’re a writer whether you outline, or fast draft, write short stories or epic trilogies, write 17 drafts or three. That alone is valuable stuff. But what you will also find are sage, positive, practical accounts of what works for her and might also work for you. Have a read! Try it out. And then go buy all her books. They rule. You’ll wish you had crows for best friends, too.

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